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The Tales of Karna and Kunti

Week 7 Story: What Arjuna and Karna Were Really Thinking

*I have updated this story and the newer version can be found listed under Inner Thoughts on my website. 

Arjun and Karan battle. Source: Wikimedia. 

Arjuna’s POV

Arjuna watched as his brother Karna stepped onto the battlefield, bow at the ready. “Look at his stupid face,” thought Arjuna. 

He looked around at all of his soldiers and his brother’s soldiers to see them all watching. He knew in that moment. He knew this was going to be the last fight. The winner though, that he didn’t know. He wasn’t sure who was going to come out victorious in the end but he knew he was going to give his all. So slowly, he started making his way onto the battlefield. 

“I have to win this fight. If Karna beats me, my soldiers are going to make fun of me. Bhima is going to crush me to death. Literally crush me to death,” thought Arjuna.

As he took his place on his chariot, he looked up to see Karna staring at him.

Karna’s POV

“Oh brother, you are so going down today,” thought Karna. “There is no way I’m losing to my little brother.” 

Karna couldn’t help but cringe when he saw his brother. He looked like a fly and a fly Karna so badly want to smash. 

He began shooting arrows at Arjuna, hoping one of them would pierce him in the heart. His arrows were hitting Arjuna spot on and he knew from the way Arjuna reacted that they were stinging like snakes. 

Arjuna’s POV

“Bloody hell! These arrows are stinging so badly. Karna is getting it now.” He set off his own set of arrows and they it looked like a rain shower of arrows had descended on Karna. 

Arjuna felt his bow snap and knew he was in trouble. “Stop, Karna! You can’t attack me like this. You know that’s against the rules.” But from the look on Karna’s face, he knew his brother didn’t care.

Karna’s POV

“HAHA you little brat. That’s what you get,” thought Karna. He continued to shoot arrows at Arjuna until he knew he was gravely injured.

However, he saw Arjuna get up and restring his bow, and his brother did not look too happy. But Karna wasn’t scared. As he was about to send another set of arrows on Arjuna, he felt his chariot sink into the ground.  

“Oh no. No no no!” cried Karna. “Stop, Arjuna! You can’t attack me right now.” 

Arjuna’s POV

“Oh heck no. What a hypocrite!” thought Arjuna. Before he could reply, his friend Krishna started talking.

“Karna, what you said is right, but you’re being a hypocrite you know? Didn’t you shoot arrows at Arjuna even though he was injured? Didn’t you and your soldiers surround Abhimanyu and kill him brutally?” asked Krishna.

As he heard his son’s name, Arjuna felt the rage he had subdued rise again and he snatched his bow. He looked at Karna with all the rage he had and let the crescent-bladed arrow go.”

He saw his brother’s head fall off his shoulders, and in that moment all he could think of was his son. 

“That was for my son. Rest in peace, Karna. You won’t be missed.”

Bibliography

Arjuna and Karna. Indian Myth and Legend. Donald A. Mackenzie.

Reading Notes: Karna and Indra, Part C

Karna and Indra

from Myths of the Hindus and Buddhists by Sister Nivedita.

Indra giving the dart, Vasava, to Karna. Source: Wikipedia.

• Plot: Indra saw that Karna wore natural armor and earrings and became anxious for Arjuna's protection. He knew one of the two, Karna and Arjuna, were going to defeat the other. He goes to Karna disguised as a brahmin, and tries to coerce him into giving up his natural armor and earrings. Karna denies to give it to him and repeatedly says that the armor and earrings are a part of him. Eventually, he says to the brahmin "give me something in exchange for my earrings and armor." Indra says "I will give you anything except the thunderbolt." Karna then asks for an invincible dart in exchange. Indra agrees and gives him Vasasa, a dart. He explains to Karna that it will hit just one powerful foe. Indra leaves, content that he got the armor and earrings. He spreads the news about what he did, however no one knew about the arrow of death that was given to Karna.
• This story reminds me of the Disney movie Hercules. Towards the end of the movie, Zeus tries to convince Hercules to stay on Olympus with him and Hera and be a god. Hercules decides to keep his life on Earth and remain as he is. I can maybe write a story of this movie plot and mix it up a little with this story of Indra and Karna.
• Indra reminds me of Zeus.
• Karna reminds of Hercules.
• When Indra tries to convince Karna to give him the armor and earrings just like Zeus tries to convince Hercules to stay. 
• Hercules doesn't give in to the offer but Karna does in exchange for something so maybe I can add in my own twist to this.

Readings Notes: Arjuna and Karna, Part D

Arjuna and Karna

from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie.

Arjuna beheads Karna. Source: Wikipedia.

• Plot: Arjuna and Karna are facing each other in battle. They are throwing arrows each other while Krishna and Shalya guide the chariots. The arrows they were hitting each other with were deadly. At one point, Arjuna's bowstring severed after being struck. He tells Karna to stop because the rules of battle state that you can't attack a disabled foe. Karna however doesn't listen and proceeds to shower arrows on Arjuna. When Arjuna had restrung his bow in his rage, he shot many arrows at Karna. A wheel on Karna's chariot sank into the ground and Shalya couldn't control the horses to go forward. Karna calls out to Arjuna to stop and not fight because he can't attack a helpless enemy. Krishna interjects and tells Karna how hypocritical it was of him to say that when Karna attacked Arjuna when he was helpless and how Karna and his soldiers had murdered Arjuna's son, Abhimanyu. When Arjuna heard his son's name, he was filled with rage and he shot his arrow straight at Karna, severing his head. In the end, a brother had fallen by a brother's hand.
• Strong points: 
• The figurative language when describing when the arrows were shot
• "The arrows of Arjuna fell upon Karna like to summer rain."
• "Karna's arrows were like stinging snakes and they drank blood."
• The figurative language when describing Arjuna's rage.
• "Rose up like a stricken and angry tiger held at bay"
• I think for a story based on this chapter, I could extend the ending and show it from Karna's point of view up till the point where he is beheaded.
• I can maybe have something like his soul leaving the body and him looking down at his severed head and body, and show the emotions he's going through.

Week 6 Story: Kunti's Farewell

*I have updated this story and this newer version is on my website listed under Rough Goodbyes.

Kunti bids farewell to Karna. Source: Mojarto. 

Kunti's Farewell

As Kunti made her way down to the river with her newborn son, she couldn't help feeling overwhelmed with emotions of all range. She had millions of thoughts running through mind.

"What will people think if they find out? How will I face everyone," thought Kunti. But the one thought that was the most prominent was "can I really give up my son?" She held back tears for she knew she had to be strong about this. 

She stared down at her boy, her beautiful baby Karna. Out of all the emotions she was feeling, she felt shame at the moment. Shame that she knew will haunt her for the rest of her life if she didn't do what she was about to do. 

At the riverbed, she wrapped Karna in the softest of sheets and laid his head down a costly, soft pillow. She placed the basket in the water and floated him down the river. This she couldn't hold back the tears. Kunti cried her heart for the son she knew she had lost, quite possible for ever. 

"Oh my child, I hope you are protected by everyone. Please protect my baby," she pleaded to the gods. "May you be shielded from harm. May your father, the sun god, give you warmth." 

Kunti sat there watching her baby float away from her. She sat for hours after just staring at the river, thinking about what she had just done. She thought about who will find her son, who will raise him.

She even thought about how her life would've been if she had kept Karna. She thought about all the trouble her little boy would've caused, about all the times she would be running after him to punish him. Kunti wallowed in her grief for a little bit longer but she knew she couldn't stay like this forever. She mustered together all the strength she could and started on her way back home. All the while, she still thought about her actions and hoped for a bright future for her son.

Author's Note: I used the source "Kunti and Her Son" by Donald A Mackenzie, from Indian Myth and Legend. In the original chapter, Kunti is shown leaving Karna at a river and floating him away. We don't know exactly what must have gone on in her head at the time, but I thought of something that I think would be what she must have gone through.

Reading Notes: Birth of Draupadi, Part B

Birth of Draupadi 

from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie

• Plot: King Drupada lost half of his kingdom to Drona, and he hoped he would have children who would avenge him. He found brahmins who would help him with this desire of his. The brahmins had a sacrificial rite and from the fire were born a son and a daughter. The son, Dhrishtadyumna, was born first wearing full armor like he was ready for war. The daughter, Draupadi, was to be the "chief of all women." Kunti had heard of the news and desired to set out with her sons towards Panchala. Along the way, they heard that Draupadi was destined to be a Pandava queen. The brothers and Kunti set out on their journey and soon came across people going the same way. They heard that all the princes of the land were heading to the swayamvara of Draupadi. The brahmins praised Draupadi's beauty and urged the brothers to go to the festival with them. They persuaded them with talks of food and gifts. The Pandavas set out towards Panchala, each holding in their hearts the desire to win Draupadi over. 
• Strong points:
• The whole scene where Draupadi and her brother are born out of the fire. I could easily imagine what they looked like because of the great imagery in the words. 
• Some ideas I could get out of this chapter for my story:
• In the end of chapter, it is mentioned how the brothers each held a desire in their heart to win over Draupadi. I think I could expand that by writing like a inner monologue for all of the brothers.

Reading Notes: Kunti and Her Son & The Sons of Pandu, Part A

I particularly enjoyed reading these chapters because these are the stories I grew up hearing from my mom. She knows the Mahabharata by heart basically so she would always tell me bits and snips, and there used to be a show called the Mahabharat on Indian TV once that I would watch with her.

Kunti and Her Son

from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie 

• Plot: Starts off with talking about King Pandu and his two wives: Kunti and Madri. Kunti's brother Vasudeva, was the father of Krishna. Kunti one day had a vision of the god of the un, Surya. She ends up becoming the mother of his son, Karna. She was ashamed of this so she wrapped him up and floated him off down the river in a basket. She prayed that he be protected by all. The basket drifts down to the rivers one by one. First to the River Aswa, then to Yamuna, to Ganges, and then finally to Anga. At Anga there was a woman named Radha who found Karna and was overjoyed because she herself couldn't bear a son. 
• I particularly liked this chapter because it introduces so many pivotal characters in the Mahabharata. 
• Strong points about this chapter:
• It was mainly focused on the females of this chapter, and the motherly love could be shown through their words of despair.
• For my story, I could maybe expand of the part of the chapter where Kunti leaves Karna, and Anga finds him.

The Pandavas. Source: India Times. 

The Sons of Pandu

from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie

• Plot: The five sons of Pandu are introduced. Kunti is the mother of Yudhishthira, Arjuna, and Bhima. Madri is the mother of Nakula and Sahadeva. They are known as the Pandavas. They are all believed to be the sons of actual gods and not Pandu. One day King Pandu dies by merely touching Madri like some brahmin had told him. The wives, Kunti and Madri, argued about who should be burned with him and go with her husband to death. The Pandavas having heard their dispute decided that it should be Madri because she was King Pandu's favorite wife. Therefore, she was laid on the pyre next to her husband and passed away. 
• I like this chapter because it introduces the Pandavas who are the main characters in the Mahabharata. It's going to be a little funny for me reading the rest of this because I've seen the show and I can still remember the actors' faces so I will be imagining them in my head. 
• Strong points in this chapter:
• I like that all of the it tells who's the father, the god, of each individual son. I'm sure the description of what the god is known for also is going to play a big part in how each son's personality turns out.
• For some reason I thought of the game show when I read the paragraphs about the introduction of the sons, so maybe I can incorporate that into a story somehow.

Reading Notes: Kumbhakarna, Part D

Kumbhakarna versus the Apes. Source: Wikimedia. 

Kumbhakarna

from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald. A Mackenzie

• Plot: The desperate rakshashas are trying to awaken the mightiest demon of all, Kumbhakarna. Men danced and shouted and blew trumpets right by the demon but he never woke. He was ran over by elephants but never woke. But when he was caressed by women, he suddenly woke up and screamed in rage about why we was woken up so early. He was informed about the situation by the rakshashas and he became ready to devour the apes. When the apes saw him, they are ran away in panic but Sugriva rallied them all back and they began to fight. Kumbhakarna beat Hanuman, and devoured the other apes. However, he was beheaded in the end by Rama. 
• For some reason, the fact that Kumbhakarna slept a lot reminds me of a bear in hibernation. I could write a story as Kumbhakarna depicted as a bear and the rakshasas are evil humans who try to use him in a war against the good humans. 

Readings Notes: Sita and Ravana, Part C

Sita and Ravana 

from Myths of the Hindus and Buddhists bu Sister Nivedita

Sita at Ashoka Woods. Source: Wikimedia.

• Plot: Hanuman sees someone looking weak and thin on the stairs of a marble palace and comes to the conclusion that it is Sita. He gets happy thinking that he finally found her. Ravana wakes and goes to the Ashoka wood with his train of women. He goes to Sita and tries to woo her but to no avail. Sita profusely rejects him and tells him he's going to die by Rama's hands. Ravana in his rage says that he will give a two-month term and if she didn't yield by then, he would torture and slay her. He leaves with his wives and a scared Sita creeps into the foot of the Ashoka tree where Hanuman is hiding.
• Strong points: the figurative language used through the chapter.
• The way Hanuman describes how Sita looks. "Weak and thin as if with fasting, sighing for heavy grief" and "guarded by horrid rakshashis, like a deer among the dogs or a shining flame obscured by smoke." 
• I also liked how the way the wives followed Ravana is described. "Followed their heroic husband like lightings followed a cloud."
• For my story, I could write this whole chapter in the other character, Sita's, point of view. I think I could use some figurative language in my story, especially when describing how Ravana would look like when he was trying to woo her and when he was in his rage.

 

Reading Notes: The Chase, Ravana and Sita, Part B

The Chase

from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie

•   Plot: The demon Maricha is disguised as a golden deer. He is pierced through heart with an arrow by Rama. Maricha in turn mimics Rama and tricks Sita into thinking that Rama had actually died. Lakshmana actually realized that it is not his brother and this makes Sita mad. 
•  I loved all the dialogue in this certain chapter. It gave me an idea on how to write dramatic dialogues for my own story.

Ravana kidnapping Sita. Source: Flickr.

Ravana and Sita

from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie and Ramayana, The Epic of Rama, Prince of India by Romesh Dutt

•       Plot: Ravana, the king of Lanka, is a Rakshasa. He disguises himself as a wise man so he can talk to Sita because he is enchanted by her beauty. He flirts with Sita and tries to convince her to become his wife. Sita gets furious and asks him “do you know who I am? I am the wife of the god-like Rama.” Ravana in a fit of rage, abducts her and flies off into the sky on his chariot. 
•  Once again, I liked all of the dialogues in this chapter. I specifically liked when Ravana said “I can torture the sun and shoot arrows through the earth.” I personally believe that one line has strong imagery and just something powerful about it. 
•  I think something I could do for this story is switch the viewpoints for both Ravana and Sita and write it in a more modern way. 

Reading Notes: PDE Ramayana, Part A

Ayodhya, the setting of the Ramayana. Source: Wikimedia.

King Dasharatha

from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie

Right off the bat, I loved the attention of detail to the setting in the King Dasharatha chapter. I think the author described the setting in such a way that you can imagine the place in your head and that is something that I want to incorporate in my story. I think I will actually look up a real place and try to describe it as best as I can in words.

 Vishvamitra

from Myths of the Hindus and Buddhists by Sister Nivedita

In the Vishvamitra chapter, I like that the brothers Rama and Lakshmana set out on an adventure. I started watching the show Supernatural on Netflix this summer and the two brothers in that show set out on adventures in every episode to do a new “job”, kind of like how these two brothers are. I think I might incorporate some of that show into my story too. In fact, the more I think about it, the more I can see the similarities in the show and this epic.